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 =  parere
daia
[01.Oct.02 16:15]
ultimul vers truncheaza poezia ta

 =  schimbari - bune?
dum
[01.Oct.02 16:44]
de ce trunchiaza?
vrei sa spui ca taie din idee?
am facut unele schimbari, sper ca va fi mai usor de inteles acum.




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