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 =  parere
antuna
[27.May.02 00:59]
ultima strofa e cea mai reusita,imi plac si primele doua si ultimele doua versuri din prima strofa

-a doua strofa e nitel prea patetica

-cuprinsul primei strofe e cam simplut, incearca o metafora,o insinuare
 =  banalitate in cimitir
AlexRed
[27.May.02 03:35]
banal pana in final
stresant si urlator
ca un cimitir
plictisitor.



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