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 =  genuneanu
ellen
[25.Feb.03 21:34]
ultima strofa pierde si tehnic si in claritate. Poate si fara ea mergea lafel de bine ca morala e chiar in galusca aia, nu mai trebuie,zic eu, adaosuri...
 =  Multumesc de sugestie
genuneanu
[25.Feb.03 23:55]
Ellen
cred ca ai dreptate asa ca galusca va ramine ultimul cuvint la incercarea mea .



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