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 =  esti si tu un mic Jim
Jigaranu Adrian
[05.May.04 14:18]
Poema asta are tot ce-i trebuie. Miroase a Jim, are spiritul lui, muzicalitatea lui.
In rest, imaginile tale sunt socante, in sensul ca sunt- destul de greu de realizat intr-un poem-concrete.Sunt de atins.

 =  altceva
silviu dachin
[06.May.04 04:12]
jim... nu imi miroase deloc a victorie, Oana. mai mult a teama si alunecare voita. viata e altceva, intotdeauna altceva...




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