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 =  stare de ne
Leonard Ancuta
[06.Aug.07 16:58]
cam multi de "ne-" in aceastapoema: neumbre, netacute, nepatrunse si din acest motiv am impresia ca nu am priceput mai nimic. pe deoparte te simti dezlegata de ramasite, insa acest "ne" te leaga de toate.

 =  Leo,
Ela Solan
[06.Aug.07 17:09]
ai impresia ca n-ai priceput dar ai nimerit-o: e chiar o "stare de ne" iar "trupul dezlegat de ramasitele zilei" subliniaza starea; de fapt, acest "ne" ma dezleaga de toate... :))

Elsa




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