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 =  o alta abordare
Alberto M. Popesco
[12.Oct.07 13:02]
remarc o schimbare de stil, desi ramane un poem plin de imagini inedite/metaforice. eu cred ca ironia va face bine.
cu placerea lecturii, foarte amical,
 =  parere
Rodica Vasilescu
[09.Oct.12 17:25]
"nuci jefuite" imi suna aiurea.
cred c-as mai alege sa schimb chestia cu poemul care suna cam pompos.
in rest mi-a placut finalul sincer.



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