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Matei Danut Alexandru
[20.Dec.08 17:39]
Incepe bine!...nu se termina(asa mi se pare mie) cu "frustarea" de la inceput, pe care eu unul, (versul sau )strofa de final o amplific!...e o realitate crunta...care provoaca voma!coreactea-za acolo..."sterg"..."...:)

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= "real..noroiul...pacat ca e ciob"	Matei Danut Alexandru [20.Dec.08 17:39]
Incepe bine!...nu se termina(asa mi se pare mie) cu "frustarea" de la inceput, pe care eu unul, (versul sau )strofa de final o amplific!...e o realitate crunta...care provoaca voma!coreactea-za acolo..."sterg"..."...:)