imperecherea rimei din strofa a 3-a ar fi o sugestie,iar versul "Sa ma gandesc la tot ce-a fost efemer" rupe ritmul,nu am o sugestie,poate tot ce-i efemer ar suna mai bine,dar scurteaza lungimea...
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