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Stoica Dan
[06.Oct.20 18:03]
Poemul l-as mai scurta, in schimb finalul mi se pare foarte reusit. Are un efect vizual puternic, credibil. Aproape ca poti vizualiza scena.
 =  bun,
dan petrut camui
[10.Jul.20 08:54]
e un punct de vedere, mersi pryatel!



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