| = x2ambivalence | corina dragomir [30.Apr.05 21:32] |
| the tone is somewhat elevated, certainly not urging action, but rather quiet in following the narrative-pattern. the poem’s apparently disjointed form may also come over as intriguing, thought-provoking. pleading for an immediate employment of voices which aims not at rendering an non-autarchic imposition of falsities at the semantic level but to exceptionally widen the layers of a neuralgia as a biological mechanism imbued by the vacuumed responses of the world. the estrangement like a steam roller is thought at one stroke of the pen. I find the ending particularly impressive, a fire-cracker in a uninhabited cave. musicality must not be disregarded when thinking of the playfulness of language, thus, interrelating with the key-message in almost every line. I chose not to quote but I consider this poem's approach a sort of a side-effect of george orwell’s *animal farm* shaped in a deconstructionist manner. | |
| = review | dan [03.May.05 12:55] |
| thank you. enjoyed reading your review. | |