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 =  Icarus
Veronica Valeanu
[30.Jul.09 21:05]
the sensation of rocks in the eyes because of too much light
human flesh & flash
i saw this like a self-induced exile, done by an Icarus who knows he might die because of his greed to grasp all the aliberation he could get

please correct - "loud"
may i suggest "melting wax" instead of "burning feathers" in the last line?
V.V.

 =  er
Veronica Valeanu
[30.Jul.09 21:14]
*liberation




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