| = ...it may sound like a telegram....|
Vasilescu Alvin Bastian
|...we all wonder...|
Liked that 'jazz armor'...
Keep it on!...
| = words in a file|
|you are right! “this machine will not communicate”. it is understandable if these are the words of a machine.|
| = Rhythm|
Edilberto González Trejos
|Text full of rhythm and as Jazz fan myself, I celebrate and applaude this creation of yours...!|
| = ok computer|
|"This machine will, will not communicate|
These thoughts and the strain i am under
Be a world child, form a circle
Before we all go under
And fade out and fade out again"
radiohead - street spirit
| = something original|
Nancy M. Popa
|Thanks for the poem.Is differnt from what I've read.Bastian and Edilberto said it best,got the idea well,so I'm speechless right now.I don't know what can I say that hasn't been said,except the fact that is: ORIGINAL.|
Good luck and all the best.
| = come in|
|welcome my friend, welcome to the machine|
| = And i ,who thought it was the matrix|
Nancy M. Popa
|You are welcome-I think those lines are addressesed to me, if not,sorry :D-.|
But we already live in a machine/matrix.Few are those who have an attitude and dare to do something.
see you at the next poem ;)
| = let down|
|Dan, you're reafirming yourself as one of the best english-writing poets on this website. I could be so bold as to say that you are providing one of the best pieces of post modern poetry I have read. |
Anyway, your original sense of poetry never ceases to amaze me.
All my best wishes to you!