| = ...it may sound like a telegram.... | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [20.May.05 19:47] |
| ...we all wonder... Good poem! Liked that 'jazz armor'... Keep it on!... | |
| = words in a file | Grosu Luiza-Oana [21.May.05 03:08] |
| you are right! “this machine will not communicate”. it is understandable if these are the words of a machine. | |
| = Rhythm | Edilberto González Trejos [21.May.05 03:21] |
| Text full of rhythm and as Jazz fan myself, I celebrate and applaude this creation of yours...! Write on SONGO | |
| = ok computer | dan [23.May.05 09:39] |
| "This machine will, will not communicate These thoughts and the strain i am under Be a world child, form a circle Before we all go under And fade out and fade out again" radiohead - street spirit | |
| = something original | Nancy M. Popa [29.May.05 17:41] |
| Thanks for the poem.Is differnt from what I've read.Bastian and Edilberto said it best,got the idea well,so I'm speechless right now.I don't know what can I say that hasn't been said,except the fact that is: ORIGINAL. Nice one. Good luck and all the best. Nancy | |
| = come in | dan [31.May.05 17:25] |
| welcome my friend, welcome to the machine | |
| = And i ,who thought it was the matrix | Nancy M. Popa [04.Jun.05 01:52] |
| You are welcome-I think those lines are addressesed to me, if not,sorry :D-. But we already live in a machine/matrix.Few are those who have an attitude and dare to do something. see you at the next poem ;) Take care. Nancy | |
| = let down | Sigartau Alex [02.Jun.05 00:13] |
| Dan, you're reafirming yourself as one of the best english-writing poets on this website. I could be so bold as to say that you are providing one of the best pieces of post modern poetry I have read. Anyway, your original sense of poetry never ceases to amaze me. All my best wishes to you! | |