| = reveal the eternal! | scorus ilinca [06.Jun.05 21:49] |
| "You uncover the external in order to see the eternal" very interesting metaphore and rime playing... what a divine soul may lie behind the curtain...it's only that the window is sometimes just to hard to brake down! all the best! ilinca | |
| = typo | Edilberto González Trejos [06.Jun.05 16:17] |
| "You uncover the external in order to see the eternal, the wall is tumbled down, the window is breaking down;" Up there I had a "typo" and wrote "the windowis"... Sorry SONGO | |
| = >S | corina dragomir [06.Jun.05 16:33] |
| at the bottom of the page containing your text you will see this link: *you can edit this text*. just click on it and a new window will open. in this new window you can make the necessary changes and then click *send*. Good luck! | |
| = Thanks Cory | Edilberto González Trejos [06.Jun.05 19:19] |
| Thanks a lot Cory... Oops! I had not noticed that useful tool! Best to you, SONGO | |
| = Ilinca Ad-aeternum :) | Edilberto González Trejos [06.Jun.05 22:32] |
| Comments full of lucidity. I appreciate that Ilinca! Yes, sometimes we are deceived by the senses and appearances and we cannot see beneath the courtain, behind the window. What is pagan? What is divine? May be we should be more open-minded, tolerant and learn to know each other better. Let me tell you that this poem was written after a tough and rough argument between 2 persons I love so dearly. Then I shown the poem to them both and the 3 of us were driven to tears... SONGO | |
| = thank you! | scorus ilinca [07.Jun.05 17:22] |
| till now I have apreciated this poem as something beautiful but real only in thoughts...now I apreciate it more, you gave life to it! real art gives life not only to our thoughts! keep on! best wishes! | |
| = off topic questions! | scorus ilinca [07.Jun.05 17:22] |
| please enlighten me with something....why some of my comments are not posted or are posted long after I have writen them? second question...how can I add a picture to one of my poems? do I need some points to do that, or something? thank you! | |
| = opening the courtain | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [07.Jun.05 12:57] |
| Life could be very inspiring...(you said that the poem is based on something real)... And about what is pagan and what is divine...it is easy to make the difference... We just have to open the courtain... Good text. Best wishes! ...Bastian... | |
| = Touché | Edilberto González Trejos [09.Jun.05 05:39] |
| "Touché" my friend. That is exactly the point. I appreciate your feedback SONGO | |