Members comments:

 =  Smart
Edilberto González Trejos
[01.Jul.05 21:34]
Dana,

This is a smart text. I enjoyed the reading and ended with the feeling, so common these days, that our lives are programmed by some Orwellian "big-bro"---
Cheers,

SONGO

 =  Songo
Dana Stanescu
[06.Jul.05 03:45]
...what if that big bro... weren't human at all :). thanks for your thoughts.

 =  nice shoot
florin bratu
[06.Jul.05 03:46]
i really like the idea. i was my self fascinanted by the analogy. i can/t write more because you're soon gonna make fun of my special english :)

 =  Didn't meen to hurt
Cocieru Alexandru
[06.Jul.05 03:46]
So common...
I just am not a modernist... sick of computers, and don't think that my life might be controled by some kind of force, just stop this computering stuff..

 =  I told you not to panic
Dana Stanescu
[06.Jul.05 08:48]
Florin, thanks for passing by, I won't make fun of you.
Alexandru Cocieru, I know you didn't meAn to hurt my feelings, but, this small poem is just an example of boosting up my imagination in a kind of creative writing exercise. I like computers, they're useful tools.
Thanks for your opinion, anyway, and feel free to come back...

 =  .
dan
[06.Jul.05 09:56]
god machine. jesus machine. pink machine. grave machine.

 =  2 cents
Edilberto González Trejos
[06.Jul.05 21:03]
credit to the ones who dare being different and make new stuff...
just my 2 cents

SONGO

 =  news?
adriana anusca
[28.Jul.05 18:53]
truly said, I've just read the text of a clever mind; still it sounds to me like the American morning news on the radio

adriana

 =  Very Funny!
Ennem Moderator
[07.Aug.05 04:15]
This means that there are also virus, bugs, acker...
I don't want think about that!
Bye

 =  adriana
Dana Stanescu
[29.Jul.05 23:38]
or an email you have just received :). thank you for passing by.

 =  deep
Diana Pacuraru
[04.Oct.05 23:45]
ironic, i feel...yes, the deep of this text is indeed deep. though it sounds strange, it is. it is indeed. i liked it.




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