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= the Haley's Comet feeling
andreea l.
[10.Aug.05 14:30]
three words: dark-marked-heart. this poem of yours, not my cup of tea, not today anyway.
= Without gravity
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[11.Aug.05 17:10]
Perhaps dark-marked-heart, the empty spaces the feeling of coldness, then after a great warmth lighting the dark cold and empty spaces. Perhaps the feeling with out gravity.
a motion hastened by the power of comet.
= words in motion
andreea l.
[12.Aug.05 15:55]
better to fill the spaces inside emptiness with light (although evanescent - the light of the comet, fading away, prone to loneliness in space and time) rather than choose not to try at all.
= Befor genesis
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[14.Aug.05 10:53]
well, before the beginning there was nothing, except for the dark cosmos, perhaps that nothingness seems to bother my empty spaces, until a world appeares giving light to the duskiest cosmos.

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= the Haley's Comet feeling	andreea l. [10.Aug.05 14:30]
three words: dark-marked-heart. this poem of yours, not my cup of tea, not today anyway.

= Without gravity	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [11.Aug.05 17:10]
Perhaps dark-marked-heart, the empty spaces the feeling of coldness, then after a great warmth lighting the dark cold and empty spaces. Perhaps the feeling with out gravity. a motion hastened by the power of comet.

= words in motion	andreea l. [12.Aug.05 15:55]
better to fill the spaces inside emptiness with light (although evanescent - the light of the comet, fading away, prone to loneliness in space and time) rather than choose not to try at all.

= Befor genesis	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [14.Aug.05 10:53]
well, before the beginning there was nothing, except for the dark cosmos, perhaps that nothingness seems to bother my empty spaces, until a world appeares giving light to the duskiest cosmos.