| = Symbolical mourning | cora denise manole [24.Jun.09 15:36] |
| I sense a gentle intensity in your poem. You express nostalgia in genuine, unpretentious words that stir painful deja-vues in the reader himself. The last line is simply heartbreaking. A crepuscular and touching piece of work. Cheers! | |
| = Dear Cora | Simona Sumanaru [26.Jun.09 17:27] |
| Some great people need to be reminded that the world looks upon them as great people. Their mistakes hurt more especially because of their greatness. Here’s an instance of such a mistake which, most likely, would be mended sooner or later. I love unpretentious words and wordings, as I am for simplicity and openness in everything around me, including people. Thank you so much for your comment, empathy and warmth. Cheers back! | |
| = correction | Simona Sumanaru [26.Jun.09 17:30] |
| a mistake which WILL be mended :-) | |