| = =big rain drops... | Gunsel DJEMAL [29.Jul.09 09:27] |
| Hi Marius ...searching for you? You've been away and came back with this poem. we've been searching for you as well. thanks for the poem. Welcome back. | |
| = thanks Gunsel | Marius Surleac [29.Jul.09 15:17] |
| Gunsel, thank you for your kind comment. I was very busy lately, that's why! Best wishes, Marius | |
| + Marius | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Jul.09 15:55] |
| I shall start with something that (in my humble opinion) would benefit from a change: the search for so much to so long A poem dipped in gothic and oh, it suits you, Sir!!:) I think I read similar pieces of work signed by you, however this one seems a lot more focused with one purpose in mind: search! ..for water, food, life – the whole cycle. the interesting part for me was embedding this message into a gothic surround... It took me through a few stages: made me think, it gave me a sense of hopelessness as well as a boost! All I can give it is my congratulations and a star. Cheers, Corina | |
| = thank you Corina! | Marius Surleac [29.Jul.09 16:03] |
| Thank you very much Corina for your words, for the tip and for the twinkle. I will change "so much" with "so long" - indeed it's better. That "gothic" you're talking about is a grave's atmosphere as well as a view over time's pass. Also, you're right with the hopelessness. Regards, Marius | |
| = some few words | Laurentiu Ion [29.Jul.09 16:38] |
| because I'm in a hurry, but I must say that I love your first poems with Jack and you know that. :) I think you should make a collection - Jack series - that will appear on the front page. of course, it's just my opinion best regards L | |
| = thank you Laurentiu | Marius Surleac [29.Jul.09 17:37] |
| Thank you Laurentiu for recommendation and for your kind words. I am glad these poems are well received in Romanian and English as well. About the collection ... will be a personal collection probably, but don't want a front page one, because those front page collections should be dedicated to all the members of the site. Cheers, Marius | |
| = strange sensation | Diana Todea [02.Aug.09 11:31] |
| Now I discover another lyrical side of your poetical personality. Nice poem, Marius, very experimental. Keep going on this path. Cheers! | |
| = thank you Diana! | Marius Surleac [02.Aug.09 13:06] |
| There are more to go. Indeed I like experimenting. Glad you liked my poem. Regards, Marius | |