| = Petru|
Corina Gina Papouis
|I would let go of the word the before the silence (last line!)..|
just a suggestion..
Otherwise a sensitive poem...
| = Corina|
| Thank you, Corina!|
See you around,
| = ...|
|you have a good perspective of blurring the amplitude as scene|
but it would be also interesting to make the perception more accute
that's why i have this sensation that the poem isn't finished
the slide seems to be fit towards an accute point