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= Petru
Corina Gina Papouis
[29.Jul.09 16:20]
I would let go of the word the before the silence (last line!)..
just a suggestion..
Otherwise a sensitive poem...
Regards,
Corina
= Corina
Petru Dincã
[29.Jul.09 23:10]
Thank you, Corina!
See you around,
Peter
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Veronica Valeanu
[30.Jul.09 20:47]
you have a good perspective of blurring the amplitude as scene
but it would be also interesting to make the perception more accute
that's why i have this sensation that the poem isn't finished
the slide seems to be fit towards an accute point
V.V.

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= Petru	Corina Gina Papouis [29.Jul.09 16:20]
I would let go of the word the before the silence (last line!).. just a suggestion.. Otherwise a sensitive poem... Regards, Corina

= Corina	Petru Dincã [29.Jul.09 23:10]
Thank you, Corina! See you around, Peter

= ...	Veronica Valeanu [30.Jul.09 20:47]
you have a good perspective of blurring the amplitude as scene but it would be also interesting to make the perception more accute that's why i have this sensation that the poem isn't finished the slide seems to be fit towards an accute point V.V.