| = complicated | Diana Todea [04.Aug.09 17:55] |
| a complicated formulation for a short poem. it lacks artistic approach and you tend to make it a short prose. not to say it's ambiguous in expression. try to stick to a clear idea or message. cheers! | |
| = . | nica mãdãlina [04.Aug.09 17:57] |
| well, it's all about all you said. therefore, I will not change. artistic expression includes this kind of approach. but thank you for passing by. | |
| = I | Corina Gina Papouis [04.Aug.09 18:33] |
| think, in fact I know(:)) that every time i see a poem by Madalina I need to get my neurons charged: she is an extremely fast thinker and her poetry follows. It's not easy to read her poems but when you do you feel you have successfully completed a puzzle!:) borderline is no exception to the rule.. sorry I spoke in third party here, it just happened.:) best wishes! | |
| = . | Marius Surleac [04.Aug.09 22:30] |
| Well, the content looks a bit like BPD's symptoms; or I may be wrong. | |
| = . | nica mãdãlina [13.Jun.10 14:19] |
| corina, marius, thanks for your words. maybe someday I'll get it right, concerning the simplicity of the form. | |