| = Welcome, Daniel!|
Corina Gina Papouis
|Nice to see you on this side of Agonia.:)|
I enjoyed the poem, that moment was beautifully described.
I would suggest replacing all with everything, I think it would sound better.
Keep them coming!:)
| = welcome new member!|
|Hi Ofelia. Good to find you on the English page as well. Your poem looks ok and I may say that it sounds better than other of your Romanian poems. Waiting for more.|
| = I'm glad to be here!|
|Thank all of you!|
Dear Gina, I think your suggestion is very good. I will change that word.
Mihai, my name is Daniel, I don't know Ofelia, sorry!
| = mea culpa!|
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