| = Welcome, Daniel! | Corina Gina Papouis [21.Aug.09 20:42] |
| Nice to see you on this side of Agonia.:) I enjoyed the poem, that moment was beautifully described. I would suggest replacing all with everything, I think it would sound better. Keep them coming!:) Cheers, Corina | |
| = welcome new member! | Marius Surleac [21.Aug.09 20:45] |
| Hi Ofelia. Good to find you on the English page as well. Your poem looks ok and I may say that it sounds better than other of your Romanian poems. Waiting for more. Cheers, Marius | |
| = I'm glad to be here! | daniel aporof [21.Aug.09 20:54] |
| Thank all of you! Dear Gina, I think your suggestion is very good. I will change that word. Mihai, my name is Daniel, I don't know Ofelia, sorry! Best regards, Daniel | |
| = mea culpa! | daniel aporof [21.Aug.09 20:58] |
| sorry, Marius! | |
| = . | Marius Surleac [21.Aug.09 21:19] |
| ok ;) | |