| = you | Corina Gina Papouis [02.Sep.09 18:18] |
| are such a minx in this one!:) you flirt with the reader and it suits you...the personification of the guitar is brilliant. I would get rid of the first 'listen' or even the second, as it does not achieve too much. thank you for sharing this hot piece of work.:) cheers, Corina | |
| = =my third eye! | Gunsel DJEMAL [02.Sep.09 20:40] |
| Hi Corina As you have advised amendments are done. Thanks for liking. You are my third eye, hey. thanks:):) | |
| + Rhythm- | John Willy Kopperud [03.Sep.09 11:50] |
| -meldy and passion are a trio that go extremely well along with poetry. A fine one, Gunsel! Cheers from Willy | |
| = =melody | Gunsel DJEMAL [03.Sep.09 19:35] |
| Thanks Willy, I bet you are the Master of the lyrics & the poetry you know it very well, hey! Thanks for the star. Cheers:):) | |
| = love&music | Laura Cherecheº [04.Sep.09 21:32] |
| we are just like musical instruments, "dumb" unless love plays us :-) I really enjoyed this one. cheers! | |
| = =Cheers! | Gunsel DJEMAL [05.Sep.09 09:52] |
| Thanks for your comment Laura You are right "Love and music makes the world go round". :):) | |