| = you|
Corina Gina Papouis
|are such a minx in this one!:) you flirt with the reader and it suits you...the personification of the guitar is brilliant. I would get rid of the first 'listen' or even the second, as it does not achieve too much.|
thank you for sharing this hot piece of work.:)
| = =my third eye!|
As you have advised amendments are done. Thanks for liking. You are my third eye, hey. thanks:):)
John Willy Kopperud
|-meldy and passion are a trio that go extremely well along with poetry.|
A fine one, Gunsel!
Cheers from Willy
| = =melody|
|Thanks Willy, |
I bet you are the Master of the lyrics & the poetry you know it very well, hey!
Thanks for the star.
| = love&music|
|we are just like musical instruments, "dumb" unless love plays us :-)|
I really enjoyed this one.
| = =Cheers!|
|Thanks for your comment Laura|
You are right "Love and music makes the world go round".