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Corina Gina Papouis
[05.Sep.09 20:04]
I believe some lines would benefit from some clarity:

'A mother is not a woman'

and then

'The Almighty chose a woman'

I guess the divine message of your poem is slightly confusing, maybe you can make some adjustments.

Cheers,
Corina
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mazHur
[06.Sep.09 03:35]
thank you very much for pointing out the contradiction.

regards

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= !	Corina Gina Papouis [05.Sep.09 20:04]
I believe some lines would benefit from some clarity: 'A mother is not a woman' and then 'The Almighty chose a woman' I guess the divine message of your poem is slightly confusing, maybe you can make some adjustments. Cheers, Corina

= thanks	mazHur [06.Sep.09 03:35]
thank you very much for pointing out the contradiction. regards