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Corina Gina Papouis
[13.Jan.10 21:11]
i think the poem needs a bit more polishing, the word 'love' appears repeatedly weakening the message..I had a go at giving it a new coat, hope you don't mind:):

'my love a flower
my soul a gift
my thoughts a bunch of prayers
you a memory

up in the sky an angel
Is traveling to Earth
scattering people with
joy
trading
kisses for hope
sadness is laughing
at one another

Love’s a winner..
(allegedly)'

cheers,
Corina




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