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Marius Surleac
[12.Nov.09 11:16]
Well done Corina. Your rhyming poetry sounds great. Though I must say that in the last stanza the rhythm is not the same as for the previous 3, but recovers from the loss with the last two lines.

Regards,
Marius
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Corina Gina Papouis
[13.Nov.09 00:20]
loneliness in Gothic colours..
broken rhyme/ heart - yes but the rhythm is ok, recovered well :)..

thank you M for your comment!
Corina

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= +	Marius Surleac [12.Nov.09 11:16]
Well done Corina. Your rhyming poetry sounds great. Though I must say that in the last stanza the rhythm is not the same as for the previous 3, but recovers from the loss with the last two lines. Regards, Marius

= broken	Corina Gina Papouis [13.Nov.09 00:20]
loneliness in Gothic colours.. broken rhyme/ heart - yes but the rhythm is ok, recovered well :).. thank you M for your comment! Corina