Corina Gina Papouis
|I enjoyed your poem, in fact it really got me thinking about that trance and its consequences...I can relate to the waiting, the patience, the let-go feeling, the contorted view of reality...I would have changed the title into the bugs' father or 'Derailed'|
a good piece of writing..
| = Thanks for your thoughs :)|
|You know you're hard to satisfy Corina? But again, you raise a good point - the father of bugs isn't really a great title. I do lean towards Derailed over "the bugs' father" - it sounds a bit too much like a mix between "the godfather" and "Bugs" Bunny.|