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Diana Todea
[04.Jan.10 21:54]
I think this poem lost "its virginity" once it began to lose its shape and coherence. Maybe a prose would do better, or the poem needs some rephrasing in order to be "a good English guide". Cheers, Diana!

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= confusing	Diana Todea [04.Jan.10 21:54]
I think this poem lost "its virginity" once it began to lose its shape and coherence. Maybe a prose would do better, or the poem needs some rephrasing in order to be "a good English guide". Cheers, Diana!