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 =  ...they both start with 'S'
Corina Gina Papouis
[06.Jan.10 15:52]
a masterpiece, Florin! Loved every bit of it: the imagery used here transports the reader to a different dimension..Depiction at its best!

‘Sorrow has
No name, but the music is spelling
a long forgotten smile.’


- is just simply divine!

Congratulations!

PS...one little objection though: gooses should be geese!..:)


 =  Corina
florin caragiu
[06.Jan.10 17:28]
Thanks a lot, Corina, I've made the correction. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
cheers,
Florin

 -  Splendid!
John Willy Kopperud
[07.Jan.10 19:35]
Both the imagery and the rhythm is excellent!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Willy
florin caragiu
[08.Jan.10 11:57]
Thank you very much! Nice to meet you at the year's dawn! Many greetings!

cheers,

Florin

 =  ...color that brushes your skin,
Gunsel DJEMAL
[11.Jun.10 00:21]
Thanks for the poem Florin.

 =  thanks
florin caragiu
[07.Jan.11 22:35]
Thank you very much, Gunsel, I'm glad you enjoyed it...




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