| = couldn't | Corina Gina Papouis [13.Jan.10 22:19] |
...quite find the soul of this poem..it wants to be abstract but somewhat is a step away from being simplistic... not sure about this one either:)): 'Dirty day swaying my way Today. Clean cut in my... Present, past and future Cleaning me from... I drink my beer. like steel I feel . dirty, clean I am' ..just a thought... cheers! Corina PS welcome on Agonia, by the way...:) | |
| = :)so | Corina Gina Papouis [19.Jan.10 12:21] |
| you liked this version better? | |
| = yes | Patrik Voicu [19.Jan.10 22:36] |
| I think it's better, so thanks for the new version. | |
| = yes | Patrik Voicu [19.Jan.10 22:36] |
| I've put the comment but it does not appear here. But, yes I liked that version better, thanks. | |