+ lic #2 on lt. lemnea :) | ion a [03.Feb.10 20:21] |
i think this is the one i like best. synesthesia between auditory and visual, inside/outside, wholeness/duality, plus a very nice and slightly mysterious setup rendered in delicate, precise images. congrats | |
= Thanks! | Magdalena Dale [03.Feb.10 22:16] |
Thank you so much, Ion! Glad if you like it:) | |
+ nicely executed | laurentiu ion [03.Feb.10 23:46] |
this is a visual poem and I enjoyed it immensely, you did paint here your own little pictures. the imagery is concise, the tone is consistent, in four words— the text is accessible. | |
= Ion | Magdalena Dale [04.Feb.10 18:59] |
With the winter wind at my window I fell a little sad, surrounded by shadows… You brought a light through them. Thank you! Magdalena Dale | |
= Laurentiu, please excuse me! | Magdalena Dale [04.Feb.10 19:03] |
I think I made a mistake. Please excuse me! My anterior comment was for Laurentiu Ion. | |