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Marius Surleac
[12.Feb.10 22:26]
please modify:
- one's
- salvation

I think you should pay more attention when writing. Like now, the text isn't well structured and looks like written in a hurry. Also, how the amount of "month" word sounds to you? ... it's too repetitive and this doesn't help it.

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Claudiu-Mihai GURGUȚÃ
[10.Dec.18 14:27]
Thank you Mr. Marius for the lecture and for the suggestions! I will look into them and see to they get the proper treatment they must.
Thank you for the constructive feedback.

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= .	Marius Surleac [12.Feb.10 22:26]
please modify: - one's - salvation I think you should pay more attention when writing. Like now, the text isn't well structured and looks like written in a hurry. Also, how the amount of "month" word sounds to you? ... it's too repetitive and this doesn't help it.

= Mr Marius	Claudiu-Mihai GURGUȚÃ [10.Dec.18 14:27]
Thank you Mr. Marius for the lecture and for the suggestions! I will look into them and see to they get the proper treatment they must. Thank you for the constructive feedback.