| = Corina | Veronica Valeanu [13.Mar.10 15:42] |
| Corina - i appreciate those 3 mood/posture-frames, exactly like large drawers. then one can only trigger his imagination to fill them with the author's virtual moods. i was thinking how and if the poem could keep the belongings in case of replacing the present with the conditional past/contional present. (let's leave asside for one moment the last 2 lines) hmm let's think together...who knows it might be interesting i'm waiting for your answer | |
| = as an exercise.. | Corina Gina Papouis [16.Mar.10 13:36] |
| i tried it, I find it loosing power as the would/should/could rather toy(s) with the idea of guessing, while I know/ want all the above...as a fact:) as an exercise it was fun! Cheers, C | |