| = IG | Veronica Valeanu [19.Mar.10 13:49] |
| Ioana, your poems always carry distilled layers of the imagination's stage directions and- just because there are layers i was thinking if somehow by starting with the climax, the intensity becomes lower and maybe it's not necessary to repeat the title if this is the key of the text ewer's round emptiness and an echo - wish within a kiss - from the invisible gong of the heart pulsing into the nave of the temples thirst from the woods old light turning chasms green with you to quench from a single glass with you to share the Night one cheers, VV | |
| = Veronica, | Ioana Geier [21.Mar.10 14:52] |
Thank you! IG | |