| = not exactly | Veronica Valeanu [06.May.10 19:39] |
| it's hard to understand why the reader should [feel between the hammer and the anvil] [morals’ scene]?- perhaps morality [that someday will own]- to own someday [Unable to feel themselves content]- without [themselves]/ to content themselves with some kind of hates Edgar pillar {throughout the opera]- the novel [Her pains to stop ]- her struggle outrun even though apparrtenant ? it's still far from causing a reader to grab the book and read it. the plot line is totally overlooked, all I can say it's a "gros plan" on the permutations in the characters'relationships. yet, there is more to it. at least you should be more generous in sharing genuine after-reading impressions. maybe in the next one. VV | |
| = Razvan | Rãzvan Bercea [28.May.10 19:01] |
| One can feel between the hammer and the anvil because Bronte's style manages to make the reader live with intensity the conflicts present at Wuthering and Trushcross. morals' scene ->(what i wanted to say) o scena/spectacol/estrada/piesa a principiilor morale somekind of - this one was indeed my mistake hates Edgar's - again my mistake...maybe i rewrote the sentence and forgot to delete the genitive which probably was correct within the original idea; i can't remember exactly pyllar - my mistake once again...maybe i found pylon under pillar(in the dictionary) and i was thinking about writing "pylon" and actually wrote something between... outruned - not even today i am not able to use the tenses correctly;maybe some grammar lessons/study would help :) eventhough - i didn't know it has to be written separately but now i found out apparrtenant - apartenent? it certainly looks and sound strange; i'm sure i found it in an online dictionary; otherwise i wouldn't had wrote it; again i can't remember exactly where i found it As for the lack of genuineness I'm sure it has something to do with the fact that I am not a native speaker. But I tend to write in the same language as I read the book. Taking all in all, a review's job is to express what that particular reader thinks and feels about the job. Focusing on the plot has more to do with a summary/recap. At least this is my opinion. Since those conflicts and permutations were the ones that impressed me it seemed normal to detail them. | |
| = - | Rãzvan Bercea [28.May.10 19:01] |
| * a review's job is to express what that particular reader thinks and feels about the book. | |