| = welcome new member | Veronica Valeanu [09.May.10 09:35] |
| you wanted the text to be minimal, but this diminishes its power to convince or convey thrills. it would be a good exercise to try rendering clusters of ideas into more subtle ways.or focus on the effects, rather than the hypostases. it resembles a riddle, perhaps too much. take more courage! don't forget to follow the rules of the site. cheers, VV | |