| = so | Veronica Valeanu [22.Jul.10 09:58] |
| what seems artificial here is the ready-served cronology/enumeration of moments. perhaps hasty and superficial. we cannot deepen the sensations or understand the purpose. | |
| = Thanks for your objections | Andreea Maresi [22.Jul.10 18:12] |
| I know that it might be an agitated and maybe incomprehensible poetry, but this is what I wanted to express. I thought of humans' hopes that are crumbled by unreal ways... When we think that are safe, then it is the real finish. But you've right... I think it is superficial. Anyway, I hope that I will be able to be more accurate. | |