| = :) | Corina Gina Papouis [30.Nov.10 23:09] |
| i quite liked the ending however i would have used 'lying on the hot bathroom floor', it just sounds better. cheers! Corina | |
| = . | nica mãdãlina [01.Dec.10 13:01] |
| yes, corina, it sounds not only better, but "more enghish" as well. thanks for your words. | |