| = welcome new member | Veronica Valeanu [11.Jan.11 20:36] |
| a very conceptual, magnanimous poem - in aiming to encompass God's "to do" list, in my view, not a woman's one if there were something to make the reader ponder on a little bit, it would be the fact that actions seem to fail in being associated to feelings; or, strangely, that the protagonist is not interested in that, but in the actions' finality anyway, that is interesting and I'll keep following your work, also to see other approaches. cheers, VV | |
| = . | Veronica Valeanu [11.Jan.11 21:01] |
| a suffering child, not suffered | |
| = welcome! | Gunsel DJEMAL [28.Jan.11 21:15] |
| Hello and Welcome to agonia Fahredin. | |