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= Suggestion
ofelia apostol
[15.Sep.11 19:03]
Instead of "won't" I suggest "I would not" (for rhyming)... For me, the poem finished with the second last stanza... ? Smiles, Ofelia

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= Suggestion	ofelia apostol [15.Sep.11 19:03]
Instead of "won't" I suggest "I would not" (for rhyming)... For me, the poem finished with the second last stanza... ? Smiles, Ofelia