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 =  magic
Mihaela Chiricã
[18.Dec.11 21:41]
...and I found it in your poem. really loved everything about it. I cannot even pick a favourite part because it's awesome! the images you suggest at the beginning truly induce a "cozy" feeling at the end. I can actually see the evolution of a long relationship and the mixed feelings it comes with which are now fully embraced...passion, care, sorrow etc.
I'm sure tomorrow I'll read it again. =)

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Corina Gina Papouis
[18.Dec.11 22:53]
thank you for such lovely words..and as they say: 'Love builds bridges where there are none'..[and this is one of many].

peace and love to you too!:)

 =  Oops!
James A Williams
[21.Jan.12 07:59]
Oops!

I think "waste" in the third (stanza) should have been 'waist.'

One never knows with a poet. :)

I often wonder what my son is doing (illegally living in the USA) or my daughter, with three girls of her own, though she lives close by.

I reveled in your poem, loved it!

jaw

 =  :))
Corina Gina Papouis
[21.Jan.12 12:42]
very much 'waist'..:))
(correction made!)
when love grows big dyslexic tendencies take over but count for nothing..I say:P..

Cheers, JAW! :p

C

 =  magic is an understatement
Anca True
[14.Aug.13 11:10]
... although I cannot find another great word to describe what you've done here, Corina dear.

this is pure poetry, and, as I said in my fb post (I permitted myself to share this piece of art on my wall; hopr you don't mind!), I would give almost anything to be able to write like this.

excellent poem, exceptional way of transmitting the feelings within your soul.

thank you for writing this. you made my day a much better one! :)

 =  Anca
Corina Gina Papouis
[18.Aug.13 15:59]
Thank you for such appreciation. It's very flattering :p.
When truly inspired one can only attempt to describe its beauty by reflecting it.

Many thanks again,

C




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