| = Prose? | James A Williams [20.Jan.12 16:01] |
| I find this a sweet, tender piece. But prose? It looks and feels like a poem to me, and if it is prose, your missing punctuation marks. Unlike poetry, we are very sticky about punctuation in prose. Having said that, a poem by any other name… ;) I loved the last stanza… err… sentence in particular. "Make love to me forever and then just one more day" Makes one feel eternal does it not? Thanks for posting it. jaw | |
| = thank you | Lynn West [25.Jan.12 19:40] |
| thank you so much for your kind words - the local poetry society that I belong to is a stickler on poem so I hesitated to use the word poem -- either way I'm glad you enjoyed my feelings! | |