| = . | Veronica Vãleanu [30.Jan.12 09:57] |
| correct here: -matches my fidelity -reverence -the monkey confessed Quite an interesting melting pot, it's as if we were to assist to the arrival of a rehashed Messiah. | |
| = , | Elena Malec [30.Jan.12 22:40] |
| thx. | |
| = Ai-ai-ai...isha , forgive my stutter :) | dan zafir [31.Jan.12 11:52] |
| Beautiful form, exquisitelly romantic scenery... slight repetitions are a favorite style of mine as well, however, allow me to suggest a more equative argumentation from the animal spirit guides. All animals presented their spiritual side, yet the fish's side was much more elaborate by having been enhanced thru the incantation of a whole prayer. In all fairness, one respectfully suggests that all spirit guides be allowed to recite at least one verse from their sacred texts. One can't help but notice a stronger inclination towards Christianity, which takes away from the balance in the logic of this here piece. Btw, how does one award a star to a certain text? I'm but a humble newbie that knows not... :) | |
| = ! | Elena Malec [31.Jan.12 22:29] |
| thanks for the comment and thought,Dan.If you don't see a + under the comment box then your level on Agonia does not provide for recommending texts. | |