| = o.s. | Veronica Vãleanu [29.Jan.12 16:11] |
| I would suggest you to reconsider removing these parts/ or compress them as minimally as possible: [Come eagerly close to your heart] [Open the door, invite them to come in] [White angels of your heart Open the door, invite them to come in] -and after [as if] you have to change the vb form: [gave] | |
| = Certainty | Sârb Olimpia [29.Jan.12 20:38] |
| 1. Later, but with deep consideration: Happy New Year! 2. Your comments are always objectively made, full of kindness not to hurt one's feelings and generous enough to encourage. I made the changes you had proposed, the poem immediately looks differently. Thank you so much for giving me certainty. | |
| = Thank you | Sârb Olimpia [15.Feb.12 08:41] |
| I am sorry... It should have been "the poem looks different"... | |