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Corina Gina Papouis
[08.Feb.12 17:38]
*Caress them
**entered him
***'you put your hands out for the hungry dogs
Jumping around to lick your fingers, but suddenly Stop
just before hurting you, they never cross the line.'

the last stanza was quite difficult to read - I suggested above a more fluent version.

Please also do a spell check before you post texts!



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