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 =  a pleasure
Mihaela Chiric√£
[18.Oct.12 16:53]
it was, reading your poem. I liked the tale and the tone; plus, the idea of the tale is brilliant and also the details of the every day life for both of them. really loved it.

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Corina Gina Papouis
[20.Oct.12 19:31]
I guess hot beverages have a certain way to get each other's attention :p

Thank you!

 =  A very good touch
John Willy Kopperud
[28.Oct.12 13:11]
-finishing your piece with six much shorter lines. And; you're a good storyteller here; presenting all those notions two complete strangers may have about one another.
Cheers from Willy

 =  I
Corina Gina Papouis
[31.Oct.12 20:32]
.. believe that these particular strangers are communicating well through their..wild imagination, even through this poem some would say..:p

thanks Willy!




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