= grammar... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [11.Dec.12 12:48] |
Please reconsider for grammar and syntax inconsistencies. rcm | |
= . | Corina Gina Papouis [14.Feb.13 15:49] |
The rhythm of this poem is broken thus the poem doesn't flow. It could be easily corrected. Regards! | |
= milk and honey | Dely Cristian Marian [20.Feb.13 00:27] |
It has that thing that arouses the curiosity. (I've been chasing after your heroes in my mind, as though I should know them; and more, like “what was so scary about that night??”) It's bitter but challenging still. Too bad you don't follow the recommended actions. dcm | |
= *** | Bodea Diana Mihaela [21.Nov.13 05:49] |
Thank you all very much and please accept my apologies for not following the recomandation. I don't have enough time or inspiration these days to do it, but I promise I will. | |