| = ? | Romulus Campan [19.Jan.13 18:21] |
| Are you sure it's "dispair"? rc | |
| = just | Bodiana [19.Jan.13 22:42] |
| Just. Multumesc :-). | |
| = hmmm... | Romulus Campan [19.Jan.13 22:41] |
| Nyet Romanian s'il vous plait anymore! hihihi:-))) rc | |
| = read, read, write:-) | Romulus Campan [19.Jan.13 23:00] |
| Hi, You are definitely developing your own voice. Intense reading of non-poetry, descriptive English quality literature, will majorly increase your conceptual choice gallery when depicting the imagery of your thoughts through words. I would recommend Tolkien, because his writings have been perfected over decades by one of the worlds foremost linguist scholars, himself! I have definitely said non-poetry, otherwise you'll end-up subliminally copy-pasting what you think would be your own poetry... That doesn't mean not contributing here! Commenting DOES sharpen your skills:-) Trust me:-)) All my very best! rc | |
| = I really do appreciate | Bodiana [20.Jan.13 00:33] |
| I really appreciate your words. Your comment is sharp in many ways and I will apply you advice. :-) | |
| = adagio... | Romulus Campan [20.Jan.13 00:43] |
| Oh, and by all means, please do experiment free-verse as well! I've been myself for a VERY long time bound to classical rhyme, and been reluctant to go wild, but that's exactly when I realised I don't have to just dream about flying... I was having wings, all along, folded deep beneath my classical shell:-) I still do rhyme, but rather as short adagios within free style poems... You know, just little intricately cut diamonds, to brighten my thoughts! And oh, stay modest:-))))))))) Take care. rc | |
| = hello again | Bodiana [20.Jan.13 21:27] |
| I do not have any ideas of perfection or of this sort to not be modest, though I may impulsive and maybe blunt in my (let's say) poetic manifestation, but I am modest or anyway aware of my limits. Not happy about it, but I am sure it's a good thing ( having the clarity of my own limits ). | |
| = no, no, no:-))) | Romulus Campan [20.Jan.13 21:26] |
| LOL, it wasn't about you, but about me! Haven't you noticed? I purposefully exaggerated comparing my rhyme adagios within a free style poem, to diamonds, which couldn't be called modesty at all, and certainly wouldn't entitle me to encourage you to stay modest! That's why I have added lots of smilies after the "...stay modest:-)))))" It was just a bit of self-irony:-) That's exactly what I meant by "commenting sharpens your skills"! This sort of very short and condensed communication helps you a lot how to get as much meaning as possible into just a few words! You'll also learn the intention from the context and the marks, including the smilies:-) Clearer now? rc | |
| = :-) | Bodiana [20.Jan.13 22:20] |
| :-) yes, thanks. Maybe I am too self absorbed as to see your self irony. | |
| = maths... | Romulus Campan [20.Jan.13 22:18] |
| "math" should go plural... rc | |