| = a time to remember | ion amariutei [10.Sep.05 09:45] |
| father is someone who'll never tell you that wings are a lie and so are parallel universes between my shoulder blades only this pale version of reality flapping along like a ghost like an angel not quite ready to be born somehow it hurt more when my father's friend died just after him in the same spring thanks for your reminder, oriana, just felt like borrowing your verses to soothe my own mood... | |
| = leap leap | Motoc Lavinia [20.Sep.05 18:36] |
| I feel the goosebumps on my skin, as a normal reaction (I hope...) not only to two good poems but also to the thought of my own father. I like the aparent neutral voice of the author which leaves room to the emotions of the reader. I recall the technique from ' reading in the dark'. I think the effect of the lack of motion is very beneficial. | |
| = father | Diana Pacuraru [30.Sep.05 16:54] |
| wow...no words to describe it...full of passion...of light...and truth...i just liked it so much, it's very good. i like the combining of words, everything. beautiful poem. | |