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+ classical gem...
Romulus Campan
[03.Feb.13 10:58]
Hi Adi,
And a very warm welcome!
Remarcable classical poem of love, written in classicism's true feeling, classical metaphore embracing mankind's last resort of sanity!
It's been long since I've been given the pleasure to evaluate such true beauty!

Looking forward to reading more from you...

rc

 =  Thank you!
Adi Niculae
[03.Feb.13 14:14]
Dear Romulus,

Thank you so much for your kind words. All I wanted to do is to lay down the fire burning inside.

Kind regards,
Adrian

 =  Adrian...
Romulus Campan
[03.Feb.13 14:17]
Yes I know, so bring your coals over here!
We'll make sure to offer you the proper fire place:-)

rc

 =  very romantic, enjoy the heat
raj thampi
[05.Feb.13 13:10]
And I turned the telescope towards me,
finding myself distant from self
My white roses were not anymore red
and the burning coal freezing me with
the winter from my bone cracking love

I put it down, and found comfort wearing
a pair of short-sight reading glasses
and
my white roses turned red again, my love




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