| = the man... | Dely Cristian Marian [13.Feb.13 20:17] |
| Dear Mihaela, I hope you won't take my opinion the wrong way, but the message, as a stream, of this poetry and the other one (in ws), doesn't fit in any scenario that I could sense. And what's strange to me is that you seem to have no doubt about it. Though I know there are many occurrences in one's life when it's better to neglect the minor particularities of the moment, yet boosting its essence, I feel like you haven't succeeded in gluing that up this time. However, as it is your poetry, my understanding cannot be accurate. Looking forward to reading more from you, dcm | |
| = kind regards | Bodea Diana Mihaela [13.Feb.13 23:10] |
| Well, Marian I do appreciate your comment and I must tell you something about me. In general I like and need to write, but sometimes it comess hard to convey the messege. This poem was about our inability as humans to see or appreciate things; it is about not being happy with the things we have. Kind regard, GG | |
| + sad coronation... | Romulus Campan [26.Feb.13 16:50] |
| Hi BDM, Contrary to my friend, DCM's confusion:-) I for myself perfectly captured your thought(s). I can identify with your dilemma, which in the end turns into an existentialist certainty, a concentrated judgement/sentence written all over our shallow existence. Your use of double, and extended meanings is paired here with the use of "the" for man, which is a sad coronation of our own self, cage and victim in the same time. Certain development in my opinion. rc | |
| = me | raj thampi [22.May.13 15:09] |
| That's me :) Self centered. When did you manage to figure it out? | |
| + I totally agree | John Willy Kopperud [24.May.13 11:07] |
| with Romulus here. Even more so; I think it deserves a place on the "recommended" list and a red star. It's clear, economic and contains a good imagery! Cheers from Willy | |
| = :) | Bodea Diana Mihaela [28.May.13 14:03] |
| Well, since this is my fist star, Romulus and Willyy I thank you very much for your considerations. And because my words will not show well enough my happiness, let me tell you that I've jumped up and down a few times after I saw my first star. | |