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Corina Gina Papouis
[11.Feb.13 14:08]
This poem does not sustain any rhythm, rhyme or white verse. It does not do any favours to the reader, as it is very distracting.

Please see if you can give up the rhyming or re-arrange the shape so it flows better.

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Bodea Diana Mihaela
[11.Feb.13 15:41]
Ok, thank you. I will try to reshape it.

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