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Corina Gina Papouis
|This poem does not sustain any rhythm, rhyme or white verse. It does not do any favours to the reader, as it is very distracting.|
Please see if you can give up the rhyming or re-arrange the shape so it flows better.
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Bodea Diana Mihaela
|Ok, thank you. I will try to reshape it.|